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"HI

so i have been reading up on lists poring over my codex and generally gong crazy trying to write a good list for CSM that i can be competitive with. if you would take a look at it i would be very pleased.\
here i go

deamon prince 155
wings, mark slaanesh, lash of submission

deamon prince 155
wings, mark slaanesh, lash of submission


greater deamon

4 chaos terminators 155
chain fist, heavy flamer, 3xCombi-melta

5 chaos chosen 135
3x melta gun, flamer aspiring champion
Rhino combi-melta 45

5 chaos chosen 135
3x melta gun, flamer aspiring champion
Rhino combi-melta 45

10 chaos space marines 220
icon chaos glory, 2 meltaguns, aspiring champ powerfist
rhino combi melta 45

10 chaos space marines 220
icon slaanesh, 2 meltaguns, aspiring champ power weapon
rhino combi melta 45

5 raptors 110
2 flamers

5 havocs
icon of chaos glory, 3 missile launchers

2 obliterators 150
2 obliterators 150

so.... what do you think?"

First things, first – you don’t have enough scoring. At all. I’d be dropping the Greater Daemon, Raptors and Terminators to get some more scoring options in there, I’d be looking to get at least two small Plague Marine squads in Rhinos to supplement your larger CSM squads or completely changing them to Plague Marines as well (though 2 & 2 works just fine).

Otherwise that's about all you can do with Chaos... Consider giving the Havocs autocannons instead of missiles and you don't need the icon without the Greater Daemon. I'd also be running both CSM squads with Chaos Glory + PFist (though the PFists aren't that necessary) and the Chosen don't need Champions - all little ways you can save points.

You might as well consider running the Princes as Sorcs to hide in squads so they aren't as easy to pick out and remember Lash needs to hit now so it's less useful. On the flip side, Princes add some combat elements to your army even though they are easier to pick out and shoot down.